I left out the vocals because my voice is just not ready, and I would prefer to have a singer anyway. I am still proud of how it came out considering I did all the instruments and mixing by myself, and the first time I ever created a meaning solo with a theme. With less than 3 years learning guitar, I am pretty stoked about what more and more practice will bring.
I called this Metal-Dance music.
I appreciate all the help you guys have given me in my other post to get me started doing this now! So glad I did not wait until the end of the year to do this like I originally intended. Lot's of valuable lessons learned! I hope you continue with your critiques so I know how to move forward.
I know the start of the rhythm guitar needs to be tighter, and the solo with the wah needs to be cleaner. I'm thinking the drums need more punch and maybe more top end on the cymbals? Anything else? Let me know.
Thanks!