First off, I love playing this song. I hope to play it one day in front of a crowd with a proper singer, bassist, and drummer. I am coming up on my 3 year anniversary learning guitar in November so I am really pushing myself. I guess when your wife comes in to start dancing to your songs instead of closing doors and putting ear muffs on then I should feel pretty good what I learned so far.
I skipped over fixing the boo-boos in the double-tracked guitars so bare with me on that. At least my playing has gotten much tighter from a few months ago. I did some serial compression on the guitar+transpose for the bass part which seemed to help a lot. I used JIA JTM45 profile which is one of my most favs. I used Brass Driver Big P for the bass. I used my Schecter Sun Valley with EMG retroactive pickups.
I was using my desktop speakers after rendering to see how it sounds on regular speakers but found using my studio headphones instead would let me hear better if the bass and drums were balanced.
Point out some critiques please. Maybe I could use a little volume drop automation on guitar's G, F#, E chord part so the bass would be more pronounce there, or vice versa?? I would put more drums fills in it next time.